If Tomorrow Comes: 55 fiction.

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Sarah started opening the post she had received from her husband eagerly.
She stared at its contents, hatred rising in her blood....................
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It contained Divorce papers and a photograph of her husband and a woman standing next to him_smiling....!
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She glanced at her sleeping daughter and large tears started pooling out of her eyes.




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    1. ThanQ Gunjan n welcome to my blog!

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  2. Divorce letter with a photograph of a probable future wife...that's insane...
    it's hard for me to feel for the woman and her daughter...!!!

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  3. Nicely written Bushra :)Divorce is such a pain!

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    1. Dunno abt divorce but that gal in the pic is cute na? I like*smirks*

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  4. very very emotional..
    but now a days husbands recieve such lettr then wife.
    well written.

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    1. Haha! Your comment made my day! Kept smiling like soo many times remembering it:)

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    1. Sweet???!! Ha ha! Well I don't know:)

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  6. what a Turn of events after the first sentence..!!

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  7. With a mix of joy and anxiety Sarah opened the post sent from Iraq by her husband an US Marine ,after so many months !!

    Tears rolled down her eyes , she looked at her sleeping daughter.....





    the post contained a picture of a woman with her husband both holding hands ,
    it was her divorce paper!!


    well i liked your f55 but again i wud point that it lacked the surprise element like yr prev post f55 ...u r a gud writer and am sure you gonna improve in yr f55 skils ,,looking forward to many more poems ,shayaris and f55 :)

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    1. Hello Saikat,
      Wow! That was beautifully arranged and engrossing! ThankQ so much for dropping by and giving me this wonderful advises:) Will keep every point of this in mind:)
      Regards,
      Bushra

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    2. Saikat, this is the better version of this story.. liked it :-)

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  8. Sad story. Wish that no woman gets this sort of a letter from her husband.

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  9. sad story but lacking a surprise element that a 55 fiction needs.. good try, Bushra :-)

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  10. Nice....everyone is complaining that it lacked the surprise element...if u just swap the last para with the 2nd last one, the surprise bit would come. But still, sometimes, emotions are more imp that surprises. And i can see what feelings went through ur mind when u were penning this. So, I'm fully contented with this work.

    PS- Not all love stories have a happy ending

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  11. wow!!!
    hope, followed by dejection, followed by pain
    that hurts!!!
    well written

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