Rain Rain come again.....:)

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Heavy rain at night with a full moon peeking through the clouds

                                                         
Rain rain come again,
Come again and  wash my pain......

Let your droplets fall on me,
Break my bonds and make me free......

Soak me wet all the way
Come again and make my day......              

Wash my sins and let them part,
Come again and heal my heart........

Let your rainbow shadow me,
Let me drown in the colourful sea....

Bring the thunder with you along,
Bring along and make me strong......

Pitter patter, pitter patter,
Come slop,splash,splutter,splatter......

Come play the music I long to hear,
Break this silence I can't bear.....

Thy arrival is a pleasure to thee,
Come again and hear my plea......

Just love your fragrance and your chill,
come again and bring your thrill............................!!!!!

                                   -Bushra



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48 comments

  1. "Rain rain come again,
    Come again and wash my pain" - Awesome Line.

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  2. Thy arrival is a pleasure to thee,
    Come again and hear my plea......

    Lovely poem indeed, Keep Rocking.

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  3. Beautiful, indeed.
    Nicely Penned. :)

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  4. tell u what .. to be honest I avoid reading poems because most of the great writers in the blogging arena use heavy dictionary-picked words to show the depth of their knowledge and command over the language,i guess. They do not realize a common reader loves poems which are simple and realistic. Understandable! I could feel the rain through your lines... I long for a rain from my eyes which will wash my pain and sins away !! Bushra Ji ..... awesome ..yet again :)

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    1. Hello My say,
      Thanx for your lovely comment! Yes I beleive in simplicity of words be it an article or a poem! Itni mehnat karke kisiko samajme hi nahi aaya to kya fayda?Right?! Keep visiting:)

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    2. hahahaha !! :D .... indeed so very right ! your blog has all good reasons for me to visit often kyoki aap jo likhte ho wo bada touchy touchy ho jata ..emotional types you see :)

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    3. emotional types? Well i dunno:)

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  5. Hey, this is really awesomeee :-D

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  6. Deep emotions conveyed in such simple words. Well-written :)

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    1. Thank you Mixi n welcome to my bog:)

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  7. nice to see rain in ur blog
    we are also in rain from last two days.
    The word pain and rain are so in this poem really touch my heart.

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  8. nice sweet nd simple poem :)gud write Bushra :)

    nw here's my version :D
    rain rain come again,,
    fill the potholes with water nd overflow d city drains :P :D

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    1. Ha ha! Well that's a pessimistic version isn't it:) Thank you for your comment Saikat!

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  9. gr8...really u rocked this time.
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    Wash my sins and let them part,
    Come again and heal my heart........
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    keep it up bushra,u swayed us with poem,
    lov it...

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  10. In short it was an explicit visualization of our feelings with rain as a metaphor...i liked it a lot...!!!

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  11. Aw, it reminded me of my childhood days.... The best thing about this poem is that you didn't write it. The child that was dormant within you woke up and wrote it :O

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    1. Yeah may be! Just love rain(when am not out shopping ofcourse*_*)Thanx for ur comment:)

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    2. Accha listen na, how have you animated that pic? It's bcoz of the animation that this post has got such a nice feel to it...when i read it, it feels that am getting wet under the rain :)

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    3. That's an animated GIF Ritesh i.e,several similar images merged together:) It has been photo shopped:)

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  12. Wow...this is a really good poem with rhyming words...I almost read it like a song...A good feeling!! Usually I don't like poems unless they are simple...Yours is both simple and superbly magical! :)

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    1. Thank you Akash!Glad u appreciate its simplicity:)

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  13. I was singing it with music in my mind.:D
    Love this poem Bushra <3

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  14. simple yet striking . Loved it :)

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    1. Thanx Maliny n welcome to my blog:)

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  15. Simply beautiful and very interesting lines... loved the way you rhymed it. :-)

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    1. Thank you Rat:) I love rhyming my poems:)

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  16. Beautiful written! I love how you captured every aspect of the rain and used it so symbolically! Lovely!

    My world, my thoughts, my musings...

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    1. Welcome to my blog Upasana dear:)

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  17. Magnificent illustration how you wish to feel nature. I appreciate the line “Bring the thunder with you along, Bring along and make me strong......” as if your courageous spirit is summoning the difficulties to make you a valiant soul.

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    1. Glad u liked it Mausumi:) Welcome to my blog :)

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  18. I am totally drenched.
    Wish it rains soon in Bangalore..even i m waiting.

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    1. Yeah It hadn't rained since ages in Bangalore....which inspired me to write this poem! But guess what? It rained last night(just drizzling) in Bangalore:).....My prayers were answered! Yay! *-*

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  19. Oh!Lovely poem,i love the sentiments behind it.You have created a melodious jingle as it were!!!!!!!

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    1. Thank you Indu:) Glad you like it:)

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  20. Hey Bushra, that is a beautiful poem indeed, very lyrical.

    Pitter patter, pitter patter,
    Come slop,splash,splutter,splatter......

    Loved the way you crafted this couplet. Really Artistic. Keep writing. :)

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    1. Hi Deepak:)
      Welcome to my blog:) Glad you liked my poetry:)Do visit again.

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