Ek Raaz Hum Sabse Chupane Lage Hain...*Shayari*

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Ab tanhaiyon me muskurane lagen hain,
Ek raaz hum sabse chupane lage hain....

Ankhon me sapne sajane lage hain....
Palkon par haya ko basane lage hain...

Haathon me mehendi lagane lage hain,
Baalon me Gajra sajane lage hain....

Ek raaz hum sabse chupane lage hain....
naino me tumko basane lage hain.....

Galiyon me abto gungunane lage hain,
Geet khudke banane lage hain......

Sirf raaton me nahi din ke ujale me bhi,
Sapne tumhare aane lage hain....

Ek raaz hum sabse chupane lage hain......!
                     
                           - Bushra

This post has been updated:) 

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49 comments

  1. awesome yaar... loved it

    just one suggestion... "baalon me kajra.." could be "Aankhon me kajra.."

    :)

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    1. Thanks...of course that suited well but if u haven't noticed, i have already used 'aankhen' in the previous lines and kajra balon me hi lagaya jaata hai right?!...:)

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    2. kajra is Kajal right?

      Some people, i guess, use it to dye their grey hair strands...

      I just remembered these songs "Kajra re..tere kaare naina..."
      or "kajra mohabbat wala, ankhiyon me aisa dala.."
      So i suggested.

      Haan, waise maine kabhi lagaya nahi kajra... toh itna Idea nahi hai :D lol

      Anyways, your shayari really moved me...full of love. :)

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    3. Aww! How stweet of u to comeback and explain:) now that i am actually using my brains it's not kajra,it's gajra....thank u so much to makew me notice that Ashish:) I'll change it asap:p

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    4. AS SALAM O ALAI KUM!!
      Dear, it's GAJRA not Kajra.. :)
      He's right..
      Bdw, AWESOME hai ye.. :)

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  2. same suggestion as Ashish. otherwise its perfect.

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    1. Hey thanks for ur suggestion n Welcome to my blog:)

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  3. WAH....kya baat hai, Bushra! Pyaar hi pyaar...♥

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  4. Wah! Kya isiko ishq kehete hain?

    Beautifully versed!

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    1. May be:) Thanks for dropping by.

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  5. good 1 and same aankho may kajra.. hehehe :)

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    1. yeah changed:)Welcome to my blog:)

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  6. U r in love Bush <3 :P
    Loved this....I would dedicate this shayari to my fiance :P ;)

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    1. Oi no! Nothing personal....all i write is just for fun and my reader's entertainment:)
      your fiance? how sweet:)

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    2. Arey nahi I am not engaged. I mean jab bhi hogi ill save it for that time :P

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  7. aankho ke tere isharon ka kayal..
    bezubaan adaaon ke labzo se ghayal..
    wo palkein jhukaye
    nazro se bachkar..
    jo dekhe mujhe tu,
    dheere se, chupkar..
    chupaye bhale tu wo ek raaz dil se..
    ye kaliyan hain ishq ki..
    rahengi ye khil ke ...
    A counter-shayari to cimpliment your well-written lines :)


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    1. Wah! Kya baat hai:) thanks for your wonderful compliment shayari.

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  8. bahut khub !!!!!
    alfazo ne dil chu liya..
    Kafi dino se interzar tha.
    Keep it up...

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  9. make it baalon mei 'Gajra'...nice one

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    1. Thank u Nandini dear:) changed!:)

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  10. The first few lines were better than the concluding ones....Nice, but not your best...That rain poem has raised the bar so high that you've become the victim of your own expectations.

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    1. Expectations is the mother of all disappointments, don't expect too much from me and you won't be disappointed:)

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    2. I'm not disappointed...and it is not a disappointing post.... As a reviewer and critic, I m just telling u how good or bad it is. Like i said, it's a good poem, but not as good as that 'rain' one :)

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    3. :) Not disappointed? *relief* ! :) I swear ur so obsessed with that rain poem :p will try and post something alike in near future :)

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    4. Hehe :)

      PS- My 30-day BlackDog marathon is over. Now, you can take another big sigh of relief :P

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    5. Marathon is over? *dancing a relief dance* Thank God.....posts were quite interesting but was seriously fed up!!!

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    1. Thanks and welcome to my confessions:)

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  12. lovely...love is in the air
    :) superlike

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  13. simple words awsm meaning ,,,,,,,loved reading these lines

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  14. wow...!! Last two lines are awesome...

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  15. awww...sweet verses! Unda....

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  16. Loverly shaayari Bushra

    Geetashree

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  17. Is raaz ko unke samne main laun kaise,
    unki ho gayi main unko bataun kaise....!!

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