Truth is never hidden-Spain.....*Short Fiction*

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Roselle Cylindra sat in her bedroom absorbing the shock. "Are you still crying Querida?" she heard her best friend enter her room. "Christos! You look dreadful! enika mou? It is past, try and get over it" she heard him say again.

As he came near, she tightened the grip on what she was holding behind her back. Nikos Kozakis  held her free hand and kissed her saying "don't worry we'll find your husband's killer Caramia and he'll be hanged to death!".

Suddenly Roselle released her other hand and shot him with the gun she was holding. He fell on the ground surprised and agonised...
Roselle sobbed and flung the pictures of Nikos talking to the assassin at him...."Why hombre?why? I trusted you and Valaimir liked you too..." she whispered as Nikos fought for his life in front of her eyes...

"I loved you bitch" he said with escaping breath "I loved you and i hated it when you were with him".

"I loved my husband too" she whispered and shot him again and again and again......



{Was in a mood for some dreadful fiction and what's better than a betrayal tale:P...The above italicised words i have used are in Spanish and Greek. I used them to set the mood:)}

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25 comments

  1. Wow really a nice story! Nice that she shot him.

    Btw u called Querida while commenting in one of my posts. Is that the name or it meant something? :)

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    1. Thanks Megh:) Was in a mood for a deadly fiction:P
      Querida has many meanings in Spanish and the one i referred to you was "favourite pretty woman":)

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    2. I am actually blushing....I am not pretty...:)
      Feeling super happy that I'm your fav woman :*

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    3. 'Coure you are pretty! *i can see u in this small pic ofr yours:p*

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    4. Ohhh start accessing FB u'll get to see big pics of mine :P

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  2. Well, a nice story..sounding like a climax of movie script!!

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    1. Thank u and welcome to my blog:)

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  3. You have been nominated for Liebser Award, here: http://thelidislifted.blogspot.in/2013/03/more-love-coming-my-way.html
    Congrats! Keep up the good work :)

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    1. Thank u so much for nominating me sudha:) i am honored:)

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    1. Thank u so much:) ...and keep visiting:)

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  5. Good story! I know hardly any Spanish but should it be caramia or cara mia?

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    1. Yes indeed it is cara mia:) missed the space:P

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  6. Super super!! :) the tone changed with every line!!

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  7. ooh boy! you packed quite a punch with this story... fiery and passionate, just like the Spanish themselves :)

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  8. Interesting! A good climax too.

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  9. well i must mention the in short lenth u pulled a nice story...
    after last 2 lines there was no need left to write any more..
    nice one... and that set the mood thing is kind of interesting

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