Is life a fairy tale?!...... *Short fiction*

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life is not a fairytale











"I love you Rose...will you marry me?"they were driving down the hill in Nik's new car. "Oh! Ofcourse i will Nik! She replied happiness written all over her face this is a fairytale and Nik is my Prince! Roselle thought. As he looked into her eyes, the car lost control and fell down the cliff.


She opened her eyes and tried recognizing her surroundings. A hospital. "Mercias! What a miracle!" The nurse rushed out calling names and addressing people. 
Where am i?We were about to reach our hotel but.......Where is Nik, Nik!

"Welcome back" his voice calmed her. Nik came closer to her but but it wasn't Nik! It can't be him! Someone similar....i think his father but why is he crying?!! Roselle was confused.

"How long has it been Nik?"

"10 Years my love! 10 years i have waited for you to come out of coma" Nik replied kissing her wrinkled hands.



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50 comments

  1. Wow. that was really romantic... :)

    good that she didn't lose her memory :D

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  2. Thats romantic, but is it the scene in the real world? I wonder what it would be like if this was a reality...

    Cheers!

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    1. For now it's a fiction but i think it has happened to many of them... Thanks and cheers:)

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  3. Hawww so sad :( But you have written it beautifully Bush!

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    1. sad indeed :( Thanks Megh:)....tum bhi mera saath mat chodna ;)

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    2. Kabhi nahi kabhi nahi :-O

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  4. nice story !!
    and this how I feel:

    a decade is nothing ..
    and so is my life..
    my love knows no limit..
    i'll wait for u..,till i survive. :)

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    1. :) You are so creative Nitesh! Thodi creativity idhar bhi pass karo ^_^

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    2. lo pass kar diya ... ye lo ye lo ye lo ... aur ye bhi lo.. :D .. its the impact of the Good Omen.... kuch na kuch fitur dimag mei aa hi jata hai :)

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    3. lao....aur lao :D Thanks for passing :)

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    1. Thanks Hetal n welcome to my blog:)

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  6. Good moving story Bushra. U really made me go 'awww'

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    1. :) You aww so much Ritesh :p Kya baat hai han ha ha :)

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    2. Infact, i learnt awwing from you :p *being truthful*

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  7. A moving post Bushra. It indeed happens to some ill fated souls. You gotta feel feel for them.

    Lovely post this.

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    1. Thank you so much Deepak :) Yes we really gotta feel for them :|

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  8. Sad...but well written...i read it 4 times over...really!!!

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    1. Wow! It's so good to see you commenting on my blog after a long time :) Thanks for dropping by Anjan :)

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  9. So much said in such few words! wow!

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    1. Well that was my main aim :) So gad u noticed it..:)

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  10. Aww thats so beautiful... unconditional love :)

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  11. love forever.. nice one :-)

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  12. true love,,,nice one bushra. :)

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  13. Very moving post. Nice write.. :)

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    1. Thanks n keep visiting for more:)

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  14. Added this new awesome gadget :b smiley yipee yay!

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  15. Awwww...thats too lovely little story...

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  16. awww....that's true love! Nice...very nice!

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  17. Now there's a twist I didn't see coming :)

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  18. Very sweet touching story defining true love!!

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  19. this sounds like JAB TAK HAI JAAN story,really horrible movie.it happened with me once,i was in coma for a week and when i opened my eyes, i found young junior doc staring at me like angel in icu.she befriended me and was angel for few months,later her magnitude of love started fading away.though l like real life to become fairy tale like night sky with stars,real life is opportunistic.its sad that people are not honest and true in real life.

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