O' Feminine...

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Eyes of pearls, Tresses of golden strings,
Trapping bewitching like the early springs.

Wandering  like a free Daffodil,
Blossoming,blooming, spreading  thrill...

Your smile unnerving casts a spell,
Gloom and doom bid farewell...

Charm that can make mountains melt
Moving,binding ,unnerving svelte.....

Queen of gossip,princess of love,
Suave and appealing like a Dove

Like a rainbow who awaits sunshine,
The world yearns for your lure divine....

A tear in your eye makes all o' them cry,
They shadow you like a mackerel sky

O' feminine, your charm and shrine,
Encourage passion just like vine....

Eyes filled with beauty and temptation,
        You-are God's most priced creation.......!!!

-Bushra




{I was searching for some inspirational pics on Google which would help me write a post when i came across this beautiful Chingi girl- Ohmigosh! she's o pretty was my reaction and like Leonardo da Vinci was forced to paint Mona Lisa, i was forced to write a poetry on this girl ;)}
P.S: This post is dedicated to the entire woman hood and specially dedicated to my new blogging friend, Megha, a very beautiful and loving female-----Love you Megh<3 :)

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79 comments

  1. Nice picture and love the poem!

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    1. I love the pic too \m/ Thank you :)

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  2. Such a beautiful and sweet poem. :)

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  3. Lovely. Long live women hood ! Amen.

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    1. Thank you Indrani and welcome to my blog :)

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  5. Wonderful lines .. in the praise of God's precious creation .. Bushra...very nice composition and to appreciate it in the best possible way and salute womankind a few lines .. here they go in the praise of the poem :

    priceless! yes indeed...
    stand you strong
    for the men so weak..
    oh you woman..
    a sister or a mother..
    wife.. or a daughter..
    u make men complete..
    beautiful and fragile..
    yet you can conquer with a smile..
    oh you God's precious creation..
    praises all timid and..
    less stand all admiration X(

    courtesy -Jack(ed) Roberts


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    1. hhahahaha sorry the emotcon went wrong hhahahahaha.. :D

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  6. marvellous poem :

    I had written few lines complimenting your poem .. but alas they got deleted I dont know why :( and now I cant recall .. not even the first word .. :( well some other time ...

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    1. This is what u said:

      Wonderful lines .. in the praise of God's precious creation .. Bushra...very nice composition and to appreciate it in the best possible way and salute womankind a few lines .. here they go in the praise of the poem :

      priceless! yes indeed...
      stand you strong
      for the men so weak..
      oh you woman..
      a sister or a mother..
      wife.. or a daughter..
      u make men complete..
      beautiful and fragile..
      yet you can conquer with a smile..
      oh you God's precious creation..
      praises all timid and..
      less stand all admiration

      courtesy -Jack(ed) Roberts
      ...........................

      I received your mail =)) =)) =))

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    2. @Beautiful lines :) And again hatts off B-)

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  7. wonderfully done! it requires a lot of skills and effort to come up with something like this.

    and i love emoticons :D. thanks for putting up the list =D7

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    1. Thank you so much Deb :) Me on the seventh heaven #:-S

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  8. Indeed...A feminine is indeed world's most priced Creations...and such a poignant verse from you depict the serenity of the same....lovely...!!!

    Now it's time to use few emoticans...i am trying it for the first time yeah...:-bd :-bd =D7 =D7 =D7

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    1. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment Anjan :) @-)

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  9. Indeed, there's much passion in those eyes... and in your verse.

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  10. All Lines are just about perfect in appreciation of a women ! captivating poem ! Well jotted !

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  11. so apt and beautiful lines, Bushra. loved it.. <3 and the the girl is so cute too :)

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    1. Thanks Meera :) I love the girl too :X

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  12. Loved this. Definitely woman are God's most prized creation!
    Each line is as beautiful as the other and so is the Girl! :)

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    1. Thanks Kislaya and welcome to my blog :-h

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  13. Lovely poem! Correct and accurate :)

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  14. Awesome...awesome....just loved it!!! :)
    Loved it!!! Especially "Your smile unnerving casts a spell,
    Gloom and doom bid farewell..." :D:D
    (If you were a guy writing this...there were fair chances of me falling in love with you :D:D)
    P.S. You got quite a gorgeous muse to pen down these fab expressions!! :):D:)

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    1. Oh! I wish i was a guy ;) :X Thank u for your sweet comment Kriti dear :-* (flirting ;) )

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    2. Haha, after reading your poems...I wish you were a guy ;) And I wish we had met and I wish few more things ;):)
      Keep blogging!! :*:*

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  15. Wah!! A lovely ode to every woman! Megha must be thrilled to bits!!

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    1. Thanks Magiciye :) Yes she would be, but i think she hasn't read the post yet :( ...... anyways thanks :):)

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    2. Ya overburst with happiness :)

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    1. Thank u Radha :) welcome to my blog :)

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  17. Wow such a beautiful poem. I cant believe you have dedicated it to me :O Thanx so much Bush. U r simply awesome. Love u :* *blushing* That girl is really very cute just like u :)

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    1. Yeah i wrote this keeping u in mind :) I am glad u loved it :)

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    2. the praise of beauty by another beauty !! :)

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    3. @Bush: Well this poem applies to u as well :x
      @mysay: Yeah beauty reflects in her poem too :)

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  18. Ohhhh I forgot to use emoticons :x :-*

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  19. Hi Bushra. You certainly found a picture worth writing a poem. And you did justice to it in quite a lovely and effortless manner. I loved the poem. It's beautiful.

    Eyes filled with beauty and temptation,
    You-are God's most priced creation.......!!!

    INDEED. :)

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    1. Yup the girl is beautiful indeed :) Thanks for dropping by Deepak

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  20. Do i have words to express "NO" in short Simply Beautiful Bushra

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  21. =)) :-bd =D7 "-w \m/ :-h i'm trying ur smilies first, lov em....thats very nice n delicately written poem. good job

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    1. : ) Thanks Nandini....i love smilies too :X

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  22. marvellous composition and delicately expressed ,,,loved each line of it and ofcourse the pic too :)

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  23. Super poem and I Like the pic :P

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  24. your emoticons are as pretty as your post. Queen of Gossip....so you confess, haan?

    Geetashree

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    1. Ha ha! Yeah i confess :) All women love gossip ;)

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  25. you're really marvelous when it comes to poems.... ^_^

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    1. Oh! Thank you so much Ritesh @-)

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  26. Beautiful lines! Bushra! Loved it .

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  27. very sweet picture and sweeter words

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  28. Indeed Classic poem, beautiful lines... Bushra..=D7

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  29. i liked your way of getting inspired...your lines are beautiful

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    1. Thanks Chetan, n welcome to my blog :)

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  30. Beautiful poem Brush,
    I like the way you present it, so sweet...;-)

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  31. Lord! You Write Beautifully!

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  32. Beautiful thoughts in words, certainly. But maybe a less of rhyme and more of feeling might do the trick. I think you had something even more beautiful in mind but you tried to rhyme it out. :(
    But as I said, still a good thought does count. I'm going to be a regular here. :)

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  33. Good post.Heart touching coined words mingled in this poem and so it glitters like stars

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