Shayari Time: "Aarzoo ke Diye"

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Hi Sher's and shernis, it's shayari time :D
Finally,after a long time i have managed to write a shayari! Phew! So go on ENJOY!




Aarzoo ke diye dil mein jalrahe hain,                                              
Meri aaankhon se Aansoo nikal rahe hain,
Jo aaj tum dil me shama ban ke jal rahe ho,
Mom bankar hum bhi yunhi Pighal rahe hain....

Najane ye nain kya khwaab sil rahe hain,
Sapne aankhon me meri pal rahe hain,
Dard itna diya hai tumne hume, phir bhi kyun,
Tumse milne ko hum itna machal rahe hain?.....!!!
                                                                                   
                -Bushra 

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29 comments

  1. Brilliant...this is wonderful...!!!

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  2. Kya baat kya baat kya baat.
    Lovely shayari shayara. U rock girl!!!!

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  3. wah wah!!

    apki shayri ki shan mei ek .. shayari pesh e khidmat :D

    lamha .. din hafte mahine ...
    guzar gaye hain kai saal..
    chot karta hai is dil mei..
    sirf ek hi zaalim sawaal..
    katra katra .. thodi thodi..
    boond boond si zindagi..
    kharch ho rahi hai...
    ik aas mei..kuch nahi malaal..
    ai huwa bas itna batade..
    kaisa hai uska haal?
    bewafa muakaddar nei jiska.
    saath chutakar kardiya behaal..


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  4. Wah Wah...Bahut Khub...

    Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai..
    Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
    kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai…….
    hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai…

    - Anonymous

    Amen :)

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  5. shaandaar shayari par 'sil' ki jagah 'bun' ka istamal zyada behtar hota,aur aakhri line mein milne ke baad 'ko' lagalein to bolne mein achcha lagega.

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  6. wah! Dil khus kar diya.
    Keep it up.
    : )

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  7. Mom bankar hum bhi yunhi Pighal rahe hain....

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  8. wah wah wah!
    It's lovely, Bushra! :)

    P.S.- Please increase d pixels of your header,if u can :)

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    1. Everybody thank you so much :)
      @My say @Himadri: beautiful composition :)
      @cifar shayar: Point noted!, thanks :)
      @Heena I am sorry dear that's not possible :( There's no option to increase the pixels.

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  9. I couldn't understand :(
    Still seems great :)

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  10. Oh very nice shayari, this is the first shayari of yours that I m reading and I liked it! :)

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  11. Aww bushra, that last line.....i cud cumplylt relate to it... U are really good in shayaris, and seriously i mean it.....i recently dscovered that many bloggers are wonderful poets but mediocre in short stories...similarly, some like me are gud in stories but completely struggle with poems......
    Ur strength is clearly in poems and shayaris ....u rock this genre.

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  12. wah..ati sunder shayari...

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  13. wov very beautiful bushra.
    u rocked..
    Dard itna diya hai tumne hume, phir bhi kyun,
    Tumse milne ko hum itna machal rahe hain?.....!!!

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  14. ...annnddd Ghalib sahiba is back! :D

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  15. Amazingly well written Bushra! Loved it.

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  16. Wah Bushra.. Beautiful... Loved it dear :-)

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  17. Wah! We still long for that person. Love is bitter-sweet :)

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  18. Aha! Bushra dear.. bohot khoob.. :D

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  19. Kya khoob likti ho, badi sundar shayari hai! I second the opinion of Ritesh. You do have a niche in Poems and Shayaris, thoda aur zor lagao is par. Keep rocking!

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