Ek Raaz Hum Sabse chupane Lage Hain....*version 2*

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Kyun nain ye mere itna sharmane lage hain,
Ek raaz hum sabse chupane lage hain...

Haathon me lekar barish ki bunde,
Labon se apne lagane lage hain....

Ab tanhaiyon me muskurane lage hain,
Ek raaz hum sabse chupane lage hain....

Phool aur titliyan khafa hain humse,
Adayen hum unki jo churane lage hain...

Pane ki chahat me aapko abto,
Khuda ko bhi hum manane lage hain...!

                         -Bushra



Read the Version 1 of  the same here :)


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23 comments

  1. oh man...now that's what i call 'A poem by a Lover'..

    Feeling hearts all over?? lolzz

    btw, lovely read Bushra...:)

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  2. This is brilliant!!

    Wah wah!!

    Mazaa aagayaa!!

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  3. Wah! Wah! bohut badiyaan Bushra Ji :)

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  4. arey baba! Ye kya tha..... seriously, this was your best...i just wowed at some of the lines.....i think i would like to translate this though i dunno how it will shape up :O

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  5. wah wah kya baat kya baat...lovely shayari dear....

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  6. Love... nicely conveyed ! :)
    God Bless !

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  7. Wah kya baat hai Bushra............So romantic!

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  8. Kya baat hai Bush! Konsa raaz hai hume bhi to batao :P Lovely poem Senorita. U rock :*

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  9. So romantic!

    it could be stretched in a pretty way
    sometimes we love to live longer with the
    romantic contextual emotions of this type:))

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  10. there is such good synchronization in your lines .. dilse i would say wah wah ....

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  11. All of you THANKYOU :D :D :D I am so glad you all liked it sooo much :-@ :)

    @Ritesh of course you can try it...and i know u'll do great :)
    @Megh u rock too sweety :-*

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  12. what a innocuously romantic verse bushra. I love such composition, very true at heart. Please dish out more more for your fans :)

    My favourite line.

    Haathon me lekar barish ki bunde,
    Labon se apne lagane lage hain.

    LOVED IT....

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  13. Daymn Girl.. It is so so so heart touching and sensuous. Beauty in it's true form. Loved it all the way. AttaGirl!!

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  14. Touching words. You should use hindi fonts as well. Would lend more meaning/ weight into your efforts.

    http://bnomadic.wordpress.com/

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  15. aap to shayari likh ke jaate hai...par iski tarif kaise karoon woh sirf dhundte reh jaate hai!

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  16. "Phool aur titliyan khafa hain humse,
    Adayen hum unki jo churane lage hain..." <--- yeh sabse achhi lagi mujhe :)

    aur bohot alaa Bushra :D

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