"Chahenge tujhko jab tak saans baki hai,'
You are a very talented Shayr. So Serene. <3

aakhir aap ghar ko laut aayeen :)

Par yeh shayari aakhri nahin hone chahiye :))

MashaAllah :)

Nice shayari...Direct dil se. :-)

It's Beautiful!

Wah Wah .. Kya Baat hai !!

Wah wah!!

Is kalaam ko aakhri na kaho
bus likhtey rahiyo
Farmatey rahiyo

बहुत सुन्दर, नाराजगी की इन्तहां!

Sadly beautiful !!

now i wish i know the language to experience your shayaris, Bushra.

Very lovely.

Kya baat hai badi udasi hai is shayari mai! But love how u have used the words. Love u :*

Beautifully written :)

Sunraha hai jo tu in dil ki dhadkanon ko,
ye saans akhri hai,ye aah akhri hai...

Straight from the depths of a fuming heart--i loved it --very concise & potent.

Wah! Wah! Bushra Ji. Too good :)

Well written Bushra!

Very nice indeed!
:)

well written

ah ! sad but soothingly beautiful :)

one of your bests Bush !! Speechless !!

roke hue in ashqon ko .. aankhon ki diwaar..
bezuban .. bebas khada..dafn dil mei baatein hazaar..
aiye kaash tu palat ke dekhe..
tera ashiq ka ye paigam akhiri hai ..
is kirdaar ka anjaam akhiri hai..