All alone...

11:55


At the stroke of midnight,while the world slept, Cia lay on her mattress,wide awake.
Her eyes wandered towards the tiny barred window.A dark sky and some meek stars stared back at her. She was as alone as they were.
She could hear the distant howling of dogs....they were free...she was not!
With a sudden movement she got up and sat straight.
She picked up the small piece of charcoal which lay on the floor of her jail room and started planning her escape...




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46 comments

  1. That's awesome.

    Brilliantly written. :)

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  2. interesting one Bushra... surely a wow post :)

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    1. Thank you so much Meera...coming from you, it's high praise! :)

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  3. As agree with Najm, quite spectacular.

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  4. Good one..Short but crisp.
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  5. quite touching ! have to say a thoughtful one rather

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  6. hey dear nice thought and liked the way how you wrote...

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  7. Totally out of the box and simply wonderful :)

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  9. Good one bush. A short story is always a fun read. Keep going.

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  10. Way to go on building up the suspense, love! :)

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    Cheers!
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  11. 'Escape' - to freedom. That most powerful of emotions. Always.

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  12. Superb... The dogs were...she was not. Nice lines.

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    1. That is my fav line too... Thanks Ashish :D

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  13. Lovely write up. U r so talented Querida ♥♥♥

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  14. wOW! Quite something. You seem to be on a winning spree here.

    All the best for this :)

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  15. Short and Sweet..But was she able to escape..May be next part what say.. :)

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  16. Good one! The ending was totally unexpected :)

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