Stormeing towards the Unknown...

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Winds blew, my Storme flew
The music played and together we swayed

Braving rocky terrains and heavy rains, 
Storme and I crossed the daring planes,

The place we had reached was a beautiful sight,
Exploring the unknown we were happy that night;

The wonder car was with me so there was nothing to"Bother".
We survived rigid land and tough "Weather".

The beast had the power to change and transform
Thy name says it all “Safari Storme”...

This post is for the Contest 'I am Explorer' by Indiblogger.in and Tata Safari Storme

Read my first entry for the contest here-Sci-fi

~Bushra
Email: bushrablue01@gmail.com

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39 comments

  1. though this one is short ! but has been excellently written .. i liked it more then your previous

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  2. Interesting rhyme, indeed...

    Though the fourth stanza seemed confused
    Too many words one line had used!
    :)

    But a nice effort... all the best!

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. I wrote this poem in five minutes :P
      Thanks :)

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    2. Poem in 5 mins ... I don't know much about effort a poem actually needs, but I liked it :)

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  3. Nice composition.. angrezi shayari :) All the best for the contest Bushra !!

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  4. I like the rhymes :) Good work :)

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  5. Two posts for one contest. Tu bahut laalchi ho gai hai bushra. ;)

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  6. I simply loved the poem. What a beautiful rhyme :)

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    1. Coming from you: You can't imagine how happy I am! *faints* :P :) Thanks :)

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  7. nyc one!!
    http://eyeswantstosee.blogspot.com/

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  8. Nicely composed, you definitely nailed the rhyme scheme :)

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  9. Another One For Same Contest :D

    How Come You Always Get Rhymes So Perfect?!

    Loved It :)

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  10. Super cool Senorita! Good luck!

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  11. very nice re :D

    best of luck *hugs*

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  12. Your posts are a treat for us..very good

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    1. It's really sweet of you to say that! Thank you Partha :)

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